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June 22, 2010

Imaginasiku...

As I was rearranging some stuff of mine, I found my old Form 4 composition book... I browsed right through it and read some of the essays I've written in it... This one I liked the most...




[Ahmad, Ali and Abu are best friends. They like to travel and explore new places together. One day, they decided to.....]

Continue the sentence...



Ahmad, Ali and Abu are best friends... They like to travel and explore new places together... One day, they decided to explore the Bermuda Triangle... So, they rented a boat and sailed the Atlantic Sea to reach there... They knew that they were heading towards a very dangerous area... They heard stories about planes and boats gone missing after passing there, but they didnt care... They were prepared to die... 

When they reached the Bermuda Triangle, they saw a giant tornado at the surface of the sea... They went to close and was sucked into the vortex... There was nothing that they could do... After a few minutes of spinning round and round, they fainted...

After a few hours, Abu was finally awake... He shook the others to wake them up... They went out of the boat and was surprised to see they were surrounded by many types of dinosaurs... They also saw many wrecked planes and ships... They concluded that the pilots, and passengers of those planes and ships had been eaten by the dinosaurs... They were scared... but what surprised them the most was Bermuda Triangle was actually an island... the giant tornado was like a wall of wind protecting the island from people...

Suddenly, a t-rex came close to the boat and stared at them... It looked hungry... Ahmad, Ali and Abu ran away from the t-rex... The t-rex chased them... They ran and ran and ran until they found a submarine... The giant tornado must had blown it onto the islamd... They went inside and fired the submarine's homing torpedos... They killed the t-rex...

They then found a cool jet... They started the engines and flew into the wall of the tornado... they went through it and made it out safely... They then became rich because of the fact that they were the first survivors of the Bermuda Triangle and everyone wanted to write their story...

The end...


I got an 'A' for this essay... My teacher commented - "You have a wild imagination... Everybody wrote about Langkawi, Taman Negara, and etc... but you wrote about The Bermuda Triangle..."



5 comments:

theblogaboutsomething said...

wild in many ways. rawr

kimi said...

wow!
cerita yang sangat menarik!
kalau sy cekgu kkamu time tu pun sy akan bagi 'A'!!! ^^

Stephanie Morris said...

woaahh! cerita ni sgt fast moving. mcm pap pap pap pap pap! habes! hahaha....bagus!

crossheaven said...

haha! awesome one :)
it was always the trend to use the 'three men' thing back then wasn't it?

mR.sYaH said...

ini kreatif namanya.. comform full mark..

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